English · Topic

Directed writing: letter, article, speech, report

Purpose first: the examiner must know within two sentences why you are writing and to whom.

1 original question in the bank, worth 10 marks · still building (1 more to reach the floor)

The questions, with the examiner reasoning

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You are a resident of a ward in Gaborone where a street light has been broken for three months. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper describing the problem and what you want done about it.

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Answer: Self-mark against the criteria below. Award yourself honestly — the point of self-marking is to find the gap before an examiner does.

  1. Purpose and audience (2 marks) — from the first sentence it is clear this is a letter to an editor, for publication, from a resident
  2. Content (3 marks) — specific detail: where, how long, who is affected, what has been asked of whom so far, what is wanted
  3. Tone and register (2 marks) — reasonable and firm; a letter that insults anyone loses this mark
  4. Accuracy (3 marks) — punctuation of the letter form, paragraphing, tense consistency, spelling

Examiner technique: Two minutes of planning: one line for purpose, one for audience, three for content points. Directed writing marks are given for directing, not for description.